How to write a good essay: Paraphrasing the question

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  • Do you sometimes struggle to begin writing an essay when taking an exam? Good news! There is an important writing skill that will help you improve your essay introductions. This technique is called "paraphrasing", and it means rewriting something using different words. In this lesson, I will teach you how to paraphrase successfully and how to change essay questions into your own words. These skills are very useful for university and high school students, as well as any students writing English proficiency exams like the TOEFL or IELTS.
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    TRANSCRIPT

    Hi, there. My name is Emma, and in today's video I'm going to teach you something very important for if you're taking any type of test that has a writing component. So, if you are taking the IELTS, the TOEFL, the CELPIP, even just a university test, it can be any type of test, but if you're asked to write something like an essay or a paragraph, this video is for you. Okay? So I'm going to teach you a very important skill that will help improve your marks when it comes to writing on tests. So, let's get started.

    So, I have here an essay question. This question is actually... I've seen it on the IELTS. You know, you have similar types of questions on the TOEFL, sometimes in university. The question is this: "Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree or disagree?" Or maybe: "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" So, this is an example of a question you might be asked.

    Now, a problem a lot of students have is in their answer to this question. They see this, and they think: "Okay, education is the most important factor in the development of a country, yes, I agree." So then they... Or: "I disagree", and they start writing. And what do they write? Usually the very first thing students will write is this: "I agree that education is the single most important factor in the development of a country because..." So, what is the problem with this? Is there any problem to start off your essay with something like this, or to start off your answer? There's a big problem. So I want you to take a moment and think: "What could be the problem with starting your essay off with this sentence?" Okay, well, if you noticed, you have here the word: "education, education, is, is, the single most important, most important factor". If you notice, these are the same. They're the exact same, except for: "I agree that" and "because". The student, here, has used the exact same wording that is in the question. So, if you do this on the IELTS-and many students do this, same with on the TOEFL-you actually will lose marks, and same with in university, because you're not showing your abilities; you're just copying what somebody else has said or what the essay question is.

    So, in this video, I'm going to show you first off... First off, I'm going to tell you: Don't do this, don't copy. And I'm going to teach you ways in order to improve yourself and your answer by changing this wording. How can you change your introduction so it's different than what the question is? Okay? So, let's look at how to make these changes.

    Okay, so what we are going to do in order to change the question into a proper answer that doesn't just copy the question, is we are going to paraphrase. So, the word here is: "paraphrase". This might be a new word for you. What does it mean to paraphrase something? Well, when we paraphrase, it means we take a sentence that, you know... We take somebody else's sentence and we change it into our own words. Okay? So, we change the words of a sentence, we also change maybe the sentence structure, but we keep all the same meaning. Okay? So, the meaning from the sentence you copy, it stays the same, same meaning, but different words and different sentence structure. Okay? So it's in your words, but this other person's meaning.

    So, we are going to paraphrase this example of a question into our own words. So, first we're going to look at how to do that using vocabulary and synonyms. So, we have here the same question: "Education is the single most important factor in the development of a country." How can we put this into new words or our own words that keep the same meaning? Well, we can use synonyms. So, this might be a new word for you, too. A "synonym". "Synonyms" are words that have the same meaning, but are different words.
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    Irishe Himaya Day ago

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    Raja Ram 2 days ago

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    Naveed Ash 2 days ago

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  • deeksha singhnahar
    deeksha singhnahar 2 days ago

    Can we say academic learning instead of education

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    Sithara Banu 3 days ago

    Thank you it was useful and the points were great

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    Nour2006 Ibraheem 5 days ago

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    Paraphrasing is soo handy but then again it is very very hard to meet the word count.

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    RITESH KUMAR MISHRA 6 days ago

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    RITESH KUMAR MISHRA 6 days ago

    hello madam namsate. I have remembered 3000 vocabulary .but my problem is I am unble to not understood paragraph complex sentence ,editorial. my language hindi medium I have studied in hindi medium student. please suggest me

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    Alex Musso 7 days ago

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    babu rao rapaka 8 days ago

    poor idea....i think you are not tackling essay...you are helping to fail,with making only concentrate on words..but"Good essay will have good essence and well understanding skills elevation"

  • Josh C.
    Josh C. 8 days ago

    The only thing people retain is the beginning and end of an essay. Yet it is a useless skill forced on us by our educations system. You know what would impress me more than a smart person droning on about something neither of us care about. A smart person who can summarize something that is normally written into an essay without missing the crucial information.

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    can we use 'I' or 'We' in a formal essay?

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    monica ortiz 10 days ago

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    Smart Thinker 11 days ago

    Very helpful for international students, most of your Assignments will need to be done in similar approach.

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    Gianny Neves 13 days ago

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  • Shan Sardar
    Shan Sardar 24 days ago

    hello ,,is this paraphrasing is correct for this task in your opinion:
    students should pay the full cost of their own university studies,rather than have free higher education provided by the state.
    paraphrasing is:pupils should offer the total prices of their own university studies,instead of booking higher applied by the government.

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    Max Sahardiid 25 days ago

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    Tony Cha 28 days ago

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    teame russom 28 days ago

    Emma Great job! the second strategy called concession is particularly invaluable and provide me enormous help. Emma, was it fine to say or to use Although some ......instead of Although many ...This is because we have to boost our position (agree or disagree) not only with our argument but also with others potential argument hence I feel to supplanted many with some in this case.

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    Yeni Muslimah 29 days ago

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    nourdine1902 29 days ago

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  • Aruna srinivasan
    Aruna srinivasan 29 days ago

    Hi,
    I would like to know if we can exceed the word limit of 150 and 250 in the 2 passages. One of my essays for passage 2 (250 words at least) went to 333.

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  • Reem Rayed
    Reem Rayed Month ago

    Amazing efforts
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  • MD REZA
    MD REZA Month ago

    Moral of the lesson: Don't directly copy the phrases from question. Use synonyms and try to change the sentence structure or add adverbs/adjectives.

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    Happy Month ago

    I personally never seen any of my friends write i agree ... because .... All my friends would write something like this. It is irrefutable that in order for the successful growth of a nation necessitates an adequate and constitutionallized education system.

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    SYTH !!! Month ago

    If only my English teacher was like Emma I would be finished the tests. Awesome job Emma ;)

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    es narayan Month ago

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    drae b Month ago

    I agree that education is one of the most contributing element when it comes to the development of any country.

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    Ines Amaya Diaz Month ago

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    Lakmal De Silva Month ago

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    rekha pathak Month ago

    Writting the sentence in its passive voice is actually the biggest aspect which will get you good marks :)

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    tommorow is my paper I'm very nervous about reading and writing modules

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